Carol Bentley

In my post dated 6 June I talked about the idea of a further gift as a ‘thank you’ for your support.

This is what I wrote:

Here’s My Idea

Apart from giving you your free e-copy of the book, ‘I Want To Buy Your Product… Have You Sent Me A Letter Yet?’ I’d like to acknowledge the support you are showing me.

So I decided I’d offer a gift to the person who has the highest number of friends accepting the invitation to download the book before the invitation expires at midnight (BST) on 18th June (my Father’s birthday). And don’t worry - my system has already recorded the number of people you’ve invited and how many have collected their gift, so you won’t lose out if you’ve already been pretty active with this memorial project.

You can send your invitation to more friends at Invite More

The New Gift

I’ve decided the most valuable gift I can give is some 1-on-1 time. Specifically the lucky recipient gets a complete Bentley Makeover on a sales letter and response form. The Bentley Makeover Service has a value between £427 ($838) and £967 ($1,899), dependent upon the length of the letter.

After sending your letter and response form to me, I record a review of the letter, advising changes to make it stronger and more compelling. I’ll also give suggestions for headline, sub-heads, copy content and P.S. if these need enhancing. The recording is supplied as an MP3 file that you can keep and refer to at any time.

As well as getting a review of your letter, you are getting
a personal copywriting coaching session.

So all you need to do, to be in with a chance of gaining this extra gift, is remind the people you’ve already invited to collect their ebook and invite more people to claim their copy before midnight (BST) on 18th June. You can invite more friends at Invite More

Thanks once again for your support.

~ Carol Bentley

P.S. If the invitation link in your email was not used, the people you invited are not contacted by me again. You might want to remind them that there is now less than 36 hours before the invitation expires.

Date: Tuesday, June 17th, 2008 at 10:00 am | Category: Copywriting | RSS Feed: RSS 2.0 feed.
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