12th Feb 2008

Yesterday’s blog-post was completely off-track

Have you ever started a conversation or starting writing something intending to talk about one thing and then ended up with a completely different subject?

That’s what happened when I was writing yesterday’s blog post. I intended to share with you 36 different appeals you could consider when writing your sales letter. Instead I went off at a completely different tangent because, as I was thinking about how we identify our ideal target prospect, I remembered how sometimes recommending an apparent competitor instead of trying to ‘close the sale’ sometimes turns out to be the best action to take.

So I thought today I would get back on track and share the original thought with you…

Getting the Right Appeal

When you are deciding upon your offer and crafting your sales letter you need to know your target prospect in as much depth as possible, as I mentioned yesterday. Once you have that intimate knowledge of them you can position your offer to match what appeals best.

Here’s some popular appeals that might resonate with your target audience:

He (or she) wants to:

  1. Satisfy their curiosity
  2. Be successful - in life or in business
  3. Be comfortable
  4. Make their work easier
  5. Gain recognition or praise from their peers or superiors
  6. Save money
  7. Make money
  8. Satisfy their ego
  9. Gain self-respect
  10. Be fashionable
  11. Be a recognised expert
  12. Protect themselves, their family & their possessions
  13. Protect their reputation
  14. Avoid embarrassment
  15. Save time
  16. Gain status through possessions
  17. Get a bargain
  18. Get something for free
  19. Protect the environment
  20. Prevent or relieve boredom
  21. Get ahead - in their career or social status
  22. Enjoy beautiful items
  23. Be popular
  24. Be their own boss
  25. Enjoy leisure pursuits
  26. Gain better health
  27. Become fit
  28. Get rid of aches and pains
  29. Be sexually attractive
  30. Satisfy their own sexual desires
  31. Gain knowledge
  32. Be good parents
  33. Relax - with friends or alone
  34. Be safe and secure
  35. Live longer
  36. Enjoy their life more

Which of these do your products or services satisfy? Could you make an offer that would match other desires?

The more of these appeals you can meet the better chacne you have of increasing the response to your sales letters, adverts and web pages.

~ Carol Bentley

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